Buffi Auguero of KDS provided feedback based on the photos you took last Wednesday (which I cropped and color corrected)
Auten:
• Love this one! Orange tie reads as Halloween - when contrasted with the black ties; try grey or a different color. Also try adjusting the ties at the top so they don't leave that weird "cat ear" look at the top.
• Tie on front of envelope should be larger if we want that to read as a tuxedo.
Cabral:
• Love the RSVP card and the style in general; type arrangements need tweaking so they won't look so busy. The illustrative elements are great.
Fore:
• Interior elements/fonts are great; make cover fonts consistent with these. Notepad area seems too dark if that area is to be written on.
Li:
• Love the imaginative/creative approach here but not sure if it fits the demographic. Feels too adolescent in tone.
Parkos:
• Cover is great but there is a disconnect between the cover and interior design. Can the pop-up photo become an illustration that ties in with the graphic elements on the cover more?
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